Treasure Island

Erin McElderry

(August 22,1997 / Des Moines, Iowa)

It Just Makes Sense


Crude, rude
Something only I can see
You're in pain, too
That look in your eye
As you walk by
You avoid me
Because of you, of course
My patience is sore
I've been through it before

Submitted: Thursday, February 21, 2013
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