It Is Signal Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

It Is Signal

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It is signal
For fortune’s arrival
And strict reminder too
Live noble and prove true

As you said
About dream and paid
That love tree called “home”
Nature can play havoc and at the same time welcome

Lead simple life to be happy
We are sent here for same by almighty
Hate has no place
As we are lively human race

Build great empire
But admire too
Poor and down trodden
You have not been raised all of sudden

They have toiled hard
To build and lay the foundation of work
Be courteous and tolerant
It is their hard luck in present

Time may change any time
You may be on road sometimes
They may occupy same position
Let there be no doubt or question

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 November 2013

It is signal For fortune’s arrival

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 November 2013

FRANTZ SIMEON4 minutes ago Good read

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 November 2013

Slithey We chop wood, carry water. There is beauty in simplicity.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 November 2013

Brilliant Faheem Jawaid22 minutes ago Pearls of wisdom. Amazing write.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 November 2013

Very good! Michael Fernandez3 minutes ago I enjoyed this very much! Very nice piece! Comment +1 Tweak is in a few areas.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 November 2013

Corey SmithLess than a minute ago It's a bit hard to follow because there are lots of pronouns being thrown around. There's a deep sting of truth that resonates with impact, but its flow is choppy in certain places Comment +1 Just a bit scattered

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 November 2013

William ChapmanLess than a minute ago I understand the message, but the wording is just a little scattered. If the words were rearranged differently I would give this a two thumbs up! Comment +1 liked it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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