It Has Not Changed Poem by Almedia Knight-Oliver

It Has Not Changed

Rating: 5.0


Five years yet
no change
yet another
threw insults
to injure, but
In my poems is love
In my poems I live
In my silence
I make poems
for you my love
In my silence
I feel weak
and weary
for you my love

Almedia Knight

June 11,2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elsa Bennett 11 June 2009

This is a deep poem. I love the idea of 'throwing insults' and the defiance that so clearly rises up in the words. Short but lovely.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 19 April 2010

A TALL SURE Ma’am but with a! You’re not a midget in your thought and emotion like many of us so called poets Vertical arrangement of word is never poetry just a phantom…becomes live by vibe value virtue…then it’s a Po-et-ree Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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a message effectively said in this poem..well done

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 14 June 2009

Words would be the hallmark of treasure, to be left for others to ponder deeply, when we're no longer around.Abstractly beautiful piece Almedia! !

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 13 June 2009

Short and terse.........Last three lines are full of determination. Regards Naseer

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Saadat Tahir 13 June 2009

hi alm its such a sad and melancholy piece...yet dignified and full of determination....so much the right stuff very nice cheers and ten

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