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JENIE FRANKSAY

Rookie (07 august 1996 / samastipur)

It Had Begun To Rain


On a blue canvas,
few patches of black and grey.
thats how
the sky is looking today.

Near that far end,
sun has almost set.
red and orange rays bend
from amidst the clouds.

The sky seems larger today,
why?
is this magic of the grey?
it may.

Interrupted into my thoughts,
the whistle of the rail.
i almost didnt noticed
it had begun to rain.

Submitted: Sunday, July 14, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, July 16, 2013

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just penned down sitting on rooftop

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  • Rookie - 223 Points Shania K. Younce (10/5/2013 4:37:00 PM)

    Well I like it. Sometimes a poem might be direct. Even if the poem is not your best write it any way. I love to read. Their your feelings. If just keep writing you'll better or worse. That's just life. A nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 104 Points Siyabonga a Nxumalo (7/28/2013 1:18:00 AM)

    I for one loved it dear Jenie, I'm not one of the best poets on this site but I enjoyed it.
    keep writing.
    Siya_! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anamika Jalan (7/17/2013 10:45:00 AM)

    nice poem but i didnt like it at all as its approach is so contamparaly and out of link (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shiva Mosazadeh (7/17/2013 7:10:00 AM)

    hi dear...
    i read your poem, i think it was direct and this is not good for a poem...and decrease the authority of your poem.
    try to write when you are really have a real feeling about that thing, , , because you should not lie to yourself, especially in poet!
    be successful............. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 107 Points David Wood (7/15/2013 5:05:00 AM)

    This is a lovely poem, short and sweet. I think the shorter poems are the best. (Report) Reply

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