PoemHunter.com

It Doesn't Work With Rain by Wes Thompson

12/2/2008 8:35:58 AM

Home

Poets

POEMS

LYRICS

MUSIC

QUOTATIONS

SEARCH


Wes Thompson ( Columbus, Ohio)

• Biography • Poems • Comments • More Info • Stats • [message to the poet]

<< prev. poem	Poems by Wes Thompson: 55 / 128	next poem >>

It Doesn't Work With Rain

slowly now
it falls
from the holes
carved deep in the sky
far above me
in a spiraling motion
it seems to fill
the gaps of space that I've
determined
seperate me from
heaven

Wes Thompson

User Rating:

9.0 /10
(2 votes)

E-mail this poem to e friend

• Send this poem as eCard

• Add this poem to MyPoemList

• Print friendly version

Comments about this poem (It Doesn't Work With Rain by Wes Thompson)

more comments >>

Click here to write your comments about this poem (It Doesn't Work With Rain by Wes Thompson)

Patrick McFarland (2/3/2008 1:25:00 AM)
Great imagery Wes. I give it a 10.

People who read Wes Thompson also read:

Patrick O'Reilly

Classic poets in PoemHunter.Com:

The complete list >>

Lyrics

The complete list >>

Search in the World Poetry Database =>

Search:

in:

tips

(c) Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge.. About Us | Copyright notice | Privacy statement | Help
12/2/2008 8:35:58 AM. You Are Here: It Doesn't Work With Rain by Wes Thompson