It Does Not Matter Poem by louis rams

It Does Not Matter

Rating: 4.1


it does not matter who you are.
where you're from
or what you've done.

it does not matter, if you're
short and round, with a smile or a frown.
or if you're tall and lanky
and always cranky.

if you have the looks or body
everyone desires
or if you could even put out someones fire.

it does not matter, your disposition.
you should not be catorigized
in a position.

it does not matter, whether you're rich or poor
or if you're quick in the mind
or slow at times.

human nature and association
will always find devastation.
we're always taught that black is black
and white is white,
but! never shown who is right. (if anybody)

this decision lies in your heart
the choice you make- is your start.
so think it out before you criticize
for you also are on that line.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

this is really good.. like really

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Heather S 10 April 2009

this is yet another poem that is brilliant and one more that is going in my favs wonderful poem mr. rams heather

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Christine Kerr 10 April 2009

A really good message on quick negative criticizing decisions dooes not help anybody. There is also the message of you reap what you sew. well done 10++

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the choice is ours and with a heart if we make it..it really would'nt matter

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Kranthi Pothineni 10 April 2009

Very nice message. With a nice flow and the ending line is really good. Nice one.

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