It Can Be Said Poem by Dr. Sakti P. Chakravorty

It Can Be Said

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IT CAN BE SAID
esspeecee…16.04.09.

It can be said
To her
In fountaining
Rainy dusk to
Douse her mind.

It can be said to her
In glowing desert
After rain
Burnished azured sky
To say
No mind watching us.

It can be said to her
We’re no body
No speech
Only salvos of stupidity
To share between us.

It can be said to her
To be in together in dark of
Inverted saucer
To find stealth
Under the just born dusk sky.

It can be said to her
Matters little
What others call or say
Those reach us not.


It can be said to her
All are futile to say
As there is nothing to say
We’re in us
Not in our own me.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bachha Chakravorty 25 November 2009

‘…We’re in us // Not in our own me…’ Wonderful lines! Very softly composed and appealing.

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Nice poem where poet has given many ways. '...To be in together in dark of // Inverted saucer // To find stealth // Under the just born dusk sky….' Excellent imagination portrayed.

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Photode Photode 22 October 2009

Finest emotion for overwhelmingly intimate togetherness. Ten ++ for colorful finish. PO PO

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Katang Chakravorty 25 September 2009

So many things Poet said in the form of ‘It Can Be Said’. Finally wonderful conclusion vide infra - It can be said to her All are futile to say As there is nothing to say We’re in us Not in our own me. Ten+++ WR

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Carol Gall 10 June 2009

lovely poem were in us a great line 10

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