It Came Like A Storm Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

It Came Like A Storm

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It came like a storm
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There came one
Only one that day
With swat and swing
Itself manifesting by winds
Though the day was calm and mild
It came sudden and unnoticed
It assaulted fortified place
Where intellect resides
It quivered through
Gray and white mass
Causing thunder and lightning
Though rain, snow and hail missing
Boiling over nastiness of thing,
Mutual hostility and ill will
It hit where one lives
Hence convulsed with rage
I lost sense of thinking
And also coolness of thing
And saw it gently resting
On classic stage of grief
I nailed it on its rising
And saw it subsiding- cause
Reason set a thing wise
Winds of anger may come plenty
But they have to abide
The world of reality sensibly…….






Friday, August 1, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: anger
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amitava Sur 01 August 2014

A perfect expression of the disturbed state of mind as detailed in those words. But, yes Winds of anger may come plenty But they have to abide ..... very true

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Dinesan Madathil 03 August 2014

One of the funniest sights in the world is angry people at acton though we do not get much amused. Temper of the right kind is not a flaw but anger arising out of wrong attitude to people and things need to be checked. This storm must be in recession and its fury must be dead by now.

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 August 2014

Thoughtful write. Anger comes uninvited like storms and if not controlled it can hit many lives and will not get even time to regret..Only self can nail it down. Beautiful narration on anger management.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 02 August 2014

so true, anger management is a crying need to sustain peace.

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Salini Nair 02 August 2014

anger comes as thunder and lightning..beautiful narration on anger...............

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Valsa George 01 August 2014

When anger comes sudden and uninvited, it is like a storm furious and can cause a lot of damage! If it is controlled through logical thinking, it will subside! I liked the lines; I nailed it on its rising And saw it subsiding; ................ Another great write Deepak!

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