Clara Odelia Ciutara

Is This Going To Be Forever? - Poem by Clara Odelia Ciutara

We just live this life
But we don’t know
What would have happened
Just in the next an hour
We might plan
Of what our future would seem
But it’s all just an imaginary thought
‘Cause all we could is just to dream
Yeah, God is the one
Who’ll create our dream in our life

But, is this life going to be forever?
I wonder,
There’s no doubt this will end,
But when?
As long as sun is still be seen
Our faith of forever life
Will get stronger
God, I wonder
Why did you create this life
With so many unanswered question
A life which surely will end
But may I think it’s forever?

Comments about Is This Going To Be Forever? by Clara Odelia Ciutara

  • Gold Star - 10,546 Points Jayatissa K. Liyanage (7/30/2015 9:07:00 AM)

    Life is an effect of some courses. They may be viewed not much physically, but very much spiritually. All along, they are questions and answers. Very well versed and framed as a poem. Thanks for sharing.10. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 23,674 Points Edward Kofi Louis (7/30/2015 6:22:00 AM)

    I wonder! ! But, there is always hope in life. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,556 Points Melissa Patty (7/30/2015 5:21:00 AM)

    Love this poem! Well written! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,364 Points Kinyua Karanja (7/30/2015 3:13:00 AM)

    Why did you create this life
    With so many unanswered question

    It's very Interesting, we are born and embark on looking for answers in life but before we got the answers were dead. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,989 Points Ramesh T A (7/30/2015 3:02:00 AM)

    Indeed uncertain life has many questions to be answered! Yet, according to each one's discovery perhaps God gives promotion for betterment in every life till heaven is reached, it seems! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 810 Points Divine Hearts (7/30/2015 12:50:00 AM)

    There's no such thing as forever. All we can do is live each day like it's our last. Let us all cherish each day with family and friends, stop and smell the roses, enjoy the beauty of life! Thanks Clara. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 548 Points Ency Bearis (12/9/2009 8:47:00 AM)

    A good message indeed and insightful verses...yes God has the answer for what he has created...the question is got the thought of it...great poem....10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sameera Sameer (12/8/2009 11:21:00 AM)

    this poem is........ out of the world! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie John Knight (12/8/2009 9:16:00 AM)

    Hi Clara - a gently structured poem with lovely words - another TEN just for you! V 1 Muses (good word) on the transcience and uncertainty of life. The last two lines are the key to the question. 'We might plan - but - God is the one - who will create our dream in our life'. The Good Book tells us that 'God has a purpose for each of our lives'. For a fufilled life we need to ask God to reveal his purpose to us and to try - as far as we are able - to fulfil it!
    V 2 States the obvious we will all die and for most of us well sort of our Century (100 years old) . I answered the question inthe middle of this verse in my comment on V 1. God.... Why did You create this Life - My life in particular? 'Believers' do have Eternal Life in Heaven but as I said before - God puts each one of us on Planet Earth for a purpose. We can achieve His purpose for however long our lives last and some poeple achiee more in 10 brief years than others do in 100. Without GOD - Human life on Earth is meaningless - with Him every single day has a purpose! A lovely poem from and equally lovel Lady. Love you in Poetry - JOHN X (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Shamik Bose (12/6/2009 8:57:00 AM)

    Clara - life is temporary, hope is eternal, life will end, prayer will remain. Yet the great Tagore wrote - Marite chahina ami ei sundam bhubane - I do not want to die in this beautiful world. I am sure, your poems will cultivate the hope.. superb poem..10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 116 Points Prince Obed de la Cruz (12/3/2009 8:34:00 AM)

    I remembered Gary Valenciano's song 'Am i going to wait forever? '. good song... good singer... good poem written here. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 3, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 26, 2011

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