Is Suicide Really Suicide Poem by Lil Jam Jam

Is Suicide Really Suicide

Rating: 3.7


Is suicide really suicide or death with a cause
I mean were not breaking any laws

You hate us because we’re different and we dress in black
Because we’re filled with emotion but in conversation we lack

These scar’s we make heal our pain
And stop us going insane

Better to make our blood drip then to spill the lot
Dying happy is fine but living depressed is not

But in the end the choice is yours
Is suicide really suicide or death with a cause

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nancy 02 December 2020

Of all I have read, this by far is the best. It’s a struggle to stay alive, when you are exhausted

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William Slaughter 15 April 2011

Honestly, suicide is a cowardly thing, this basically gives people a reason to believe suicide was predetermined and they should do it, bravo, you've givin a people a reason to think suicide is ok, congrats, emo. Lots of Love

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Althea Tan 04 October 2022

Stop trying to put people down. You have a nice idea, trying to stop people from thinkin that suicide is good, but being rude really won't help. Plus, this is just a poem, with a nice simple rhyming scheme. Just appreciate some things dude.

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Robin 22 September 2022

You're pitiful, really.

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anonymous 10 January 2022

you are so sad

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Gabriela Valoy 17 August 2009

'Dying happy is fine but living depressed is not' favorite line! ! awesome job!

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Brittany Ryan 15 June 2009

wow...thats good. i liked this a lot.

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