Neela Nath Das

Is It Curse? - Poem by Neela Nath Das

To be in love with
double lives- - -
is it curse?
The tormenting soul
always cries,
and ever it burns.
The dilemma of
the words to do
or just depart,
divides the world
around in piece,
and in two parts.

Comments about Is It Curse? by Neela Nath Das

  • Gold Star - 19,422 Points Ramesh Rai (6/21/2013 7:59:00 PM)

    yes it is makes the life hell.beautiful write. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie ..... W@king Up..... (6/14/2013 3:02:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem with words filled with despair :) my most sincere gratitude for you to have created this poem: D

    -Wu (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,298 Points Robinson (6/13/2013 4:50:00 PM)

    You talk of two loves in your life one of words (poet life perhaps) and one other not mentioned. Divided love can be exhilerating at first but over time can be draining and creates a dilemma of not having time to be satisfied with effort. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,927 Points David Wood (6/13/2013 9:23:00 AM)

    We have to be truthful to ourselves too Hari. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 211 Points R.j. Wynn (6/13/2013 6:38:00 AM)

    Trying to love two women is like a ball and chain. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (6/12/2013 3:54:00 PM)

    to get the best, you have to face the worst and love having both sides
    love can be felt as grace and sin at the same time, but to be honest love is the teacher who taught us sacrifice and share
    so, do not give up because it is facing the worst, because the next one is probably the best
    I enjoy reading this one, thank you for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 211 Points R.j. Wynn (6/12/2013 11:22:00 AM)

    Just as sweet as the last one.10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,208 Points Neela Nath Das (6/12/2013 9:19:00 AM)

    Oh! Leaf don't lose your heart.Everything will be o.k soon.Thanks for your comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 12, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 12, 2013

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