Is An Old Age Curse? Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Is An Old Age Curse?

Rating: 4.9


I sat motionless after visit to an old home,
Sultry place and no visits and stay lone,
With all the agony of pains remain alone,
Reminds us of journey for self and only one,

Their woes and tales tore me apart,
Life was not smooth but in part,
People travels in jet but some still in cart,
Project self as noble and try looking smart,

Life seemed to me so hollow,
Found examples life to follow,
No joy, no happiness but only sorrow,
What to think of bright tomorrow?

I may pray for their happy and fine end,
Wish them all happy life and flowers send,
Some old couples did not succumb and bend,
Living in hope children may make amend,

Life once swept by devastating flood,
Even one’s own harass and thirsty for blood,
How to feel charm and end so good,
Some even faced starving without food,

Life is not that dull or full of comedy,
Events try against and result in tragedy,
Sometimes turn so ugly and bloody,
Your own kith and kin act as somebody,

It is shame on us and on humanity,
Why to blame self and also divinity?
We ignore good just before our vicinity,
We live in world and not in infinity

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suresh Vakil 05 August 2009

it should be taken as natural course....10

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Vinod Karmakar 07 August 2009

no it is ok it is natrual...10

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Shilpa Maheswari 09 August 2009

one should face it bravely as it is natural..10

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Kamli Kamal 09 August 2009

nobody will want old age then...10

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Saroj Davde 10 August 2009

no it is not bcse it is natural...10

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AtreyaSarma Uppaluri 10 October 2009

So near (in blood) , so far (in keeping) . My parental duty is sacrificed at the altar of my personal comforts. You’ve exposed the travails of those hapless souls left in old age homes. The nuclear family concept has proved to be a nuclear bomb on the unique joint family. A poignant, touching, and a thought-provoking composition. # 10.

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Ashley Paul 19 September 2009

I sat motionless after visit to an old home, Sultry place and no visits and stay lone, With all the agony of pains remain alone, Reminds us of journey for self and only one,

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Pami Panchal 18 August 2009

it was never a curse this before....10

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Lalvani Rekha 18 August 2009

no definitely not....10

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Sulochna Pandit 13 August 2009

it is normal course.....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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