These are my own Deeds, my own actions,
which has been traveling on my shoulders;
My fate has been written by you,
then who are my deeds to decide it;
But, I am a victim of my own deeds,
and you are just a mere spectator;
You won't say a word,
when my actions victimize me,
and yet You are just a stone for me,
But, What an irony i have created around myself,
as i see you as my own victim and no one else!
Great definition of irony in ironical words.....well done
Woooow amazing very beautiful, U show here a great talent of writing poems :) perfect 10+++
excellent write..we are the victims of our own deeds and standing as helpless because of the impending fey...beautiful poetry...may I invite you to read my new poems
Beautiful writing, you continue to impress with your wonderful words.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Superb use of poetic mind...i appreciate