Iron Men Cannot Cry Poem by tele seal

Iron Men Cannot Cry

Rating: 5.0


Iron men cannot cry
for fear of rust.

like knights in armor fear the dust
for then they'll fail to shine

dents exposed and faults and scuffs
that show we're men and not as tough

So atlas shrugged, Achilles fell
Delilah's love brought Samson's hell
Demi-Gods turned back to men
Just mortal beings once again

No rest allowed not a gasp or a wince or a breath
for that would mean a certain death
to the illusion all must see

that there is no weakness in our wall
and that we're human after all

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 07 October 2013

Beautiful start with nice imagery iron men cannot cry, for fear of rust./ concluding is that there is no weakness in our wall and that we're human after all a farcical nice lovely poem thank you 10 voted for this gem

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