Kavya ...


Iphone (Cinquain) - Poem by Kavya ...

iPhone
Intellectual phone
Of sixth generation
Cool Mobile Operating System
Smartphone


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Thanks to Chandra Mam again for this creativity.

Comments about Iphone (Cinquain) by Kavya ...

  • Gold Star - 8,908 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/25/2013 11:57:00 AM)

    Short and Sweet but very valuable iphone....Enjoyed reading it.....Beautiful write Kavya.. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 657 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (7/3/2013 10:59:00 AM)

    Kaavya, dear, your Cinquain is really smart on the iPhone which I enjoyed! Please keep writing. It's a pleasure to receive your thanks but you know I learnt it from Poet Dhal Ravi so thanks to him, Kavya! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points David Wood (6/18/2013 2:51:00 PM)

    A lovely chinquain that I'm commenting on with my not so smartphone. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,443 Points Kavya . (6/18/2013 4:12:00 AM)

    hey bro, wat a cinquain man! great! thx (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,443 Points Kavya . (6/18/2013 4:11:00 AM)

    thnx shahzia mam, yes as u said every comment matters (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 930 Points Shahzia Batool (6/17/2013 8:33:00 AM)

    we learn things from our seniors, even by their comments on poems we learn the art of poetry, good work and nice acknowledgement! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 17, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, June 17, 2013


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