Invisible Poem by Fidelis Patronus

Invisible

Rating: 3.6


Yes i am invisible sometimes
And so are my rhymes

O to be invisible!
Think of the things i could do!

The popular speak of this silently
When they want some privacy

I am invisible sometimes
Because i am not popular
Only those who seek a personality
As rare as me
Might be able to find me

You must blend in with me
Like a soldier in a tree
You may not see me at first
And if you do
You think
'Yes she belongs there,
Invisible'

But if you find me
In my fake jungle collage
Approach me
And you will see me

Once you know me
I will stand out
Like a cut on your knee

Once you know me
You’ll say
'She doesn’t belong there,
She will no longer stay'

Those who seek me
And know me
Will see me

Those who don’t
Can’t find me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jodie C 04 May 2005

That's brilliant, really! You should be very proud of it, it's fantastic! : -) I really liked it

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Ivy Christou 05 March 2005

Great poem. Very powerfull. Especially the verses referring to the fact that people can find you if only they seek you. It is reminds of God in a way. He is everywhere but can only be felt and found by people who are willing to find Him. Well done HBH

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Pradeep Dhavakumar 16 December 2004

Nice One.Thanks you.

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