Intriguing Poem by Edward Kofi Louis
Intriguing
A story from outside,
Intriguing!
With the problems of life;
But, try to defend the truth and live in peace.
Sweet pain!
With pleasure and pain in love;
Like sticks and stones fighting each other.
Handsome,
Affection;
A rite of passage,
Attractive.
Beauty,
To the place of love;
Beautiful!
With the acts of your works;
Sending out a story to the people.
Wonderful line to end this beautiful poem..............Beauty, To the place of love; Beautiful! With the acts of your works; Sending out a story to the people.
A story from outside, Intriguing! With the problems of life; Amazingly and very finely presented this wise work. Nice.10
This poem sends out messages like little spurts from a fountain. Little lines contain complete thoughts: Try to defend the truth and live in peace. This is no easy feat. Or, when love delivers both pain and pleasure - fighting each other with sticks and stones. Good analogy. This poem does not easily surrender its meaning, but it was well worth the effort thinking about it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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This is a beautiful poem. It delivers the message of peace and love with out imposing it. Loved it. Thank you for sharing. Thank you so much for your recent comment on my poem.