Into Thin Air Poem by Patti Masterman

Into Thin Air

Rating: 4.8


We were never in our pictures,
Though our smiles were frozen fast:
It was the flutter of a shutter-
And you knew it'd never last.

All our dreams ended at daylight,
And real life took over then;
Though the past was fading fast-
We could still remember when.

You can go back to the photos;
You can see the people there-
But they're ghosts, who lost the most
Of themselves, into thin air.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Smoky Hoss 23 February 2012

Excellent; I do love this type of writing. Mystery is movement within the soul.

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Estrellita Dedel 17 August 2011

beautifully written! this deserves a 10! :)

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