Into The Mist Poem by Paige Scott

Into The Mist

Rating: 5.0


***One of my Christian themed poems. Allegory.***


Strolling down a sylvan path,
I gazed into the fog.
‘Twas thick and grey—I could not see
The trail wound through the bog.

I paused a moment—in my thoughts—
Inside I blankly peered.
But what might lie beyond the mist
Was unknown to me, I feared.

I wondered at what mystery
Was shrouded by the shrubs—
I pondered what dark danger
Might swoop silent from above.

The earth was damp and smelled so fresh—
I could have stayed right there.
But I felt told to go explore
Those secrets in the air.

But still I waited silently—
And wished I had a Guide.
For I was surely frightened
Of what things the mist might hide.

I lingered longer than I should;
But then I heard a voice.
‘Twas simply a Father of a man
Who inquired of my choice.

“What do you here, my child? ”
He asked— but knowingly—
“Why go you not still on this path
I trimmed for you, so lovingly? ”

I replied with shame upon my face,
“I go along Life’s Way—
But then there came the thickest fog—
That is why I delay.”

He asked again, “What do you here?
And why have you delayed?
The path I trimmed is just for you—
Pray, tell why you have stayed.”

I answered thus, “I am afraid!
This shadow of doubt blocks my way.
I know not what may lie beyond—
For a Guide I wish and pray! ”

He looked at me so tenderly
And then He took my hand.
“Child, ” said He, “I will be your Guide.
I will lead you from where you stand.”

“Together, ” said He, “We will go through the mist.
We shall brave this great Unknown.
I know what lies behind this cloud—
My plan you will be shown.”

This path of life He paved for me.
Then the Father led me through!
So when you too meet a dark mist—
He will do the same for you!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Bagley 28 April 2009

Paige, this is beautiful, just simply lovely and I can hardly believe it came from a fifteen year old soul. I love it and it will go in my favorites. Susan

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Linda Moore 01 July 2009

This is a wonderful poem, very nice writing.....10

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Kale Beaudry 26 June 2009

You are so young but your poetry is fantastic! You really have a grip on what it is to write a poem, reflected by your topic choice and perfect meter. I am very, very impressed... you have no idea how many 15-year olds (girls, especially) spend their time writing about broken hearts or that hot guy they saw at the seven-eleven. Kudos to a blossoming teenage poet.

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Nothern Cross 26 June 2009

Such an insightful poem, reminds me of the 'The road not taken'.

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Cheryl Davis Miller 01 May 2009

Paige you write with an air of a celtic poet, I love it and you are not afraid to tell a story in poem form.I have a 11 year old grandaughter named Paige, I'll have to show her your poetry. Your parents must be proud.Stick with it.I was in my 40ty's before I ever let any one read my poems.Very good. Cheryl

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You are a born poet Paige. The message and composition is outstanding for your tender age. The rhyme and rhythm are perfect and leads the reader on a journey of discovery. Congratulations! Karin Anderson top marks!

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