International Women's Day Poem by Seamus O' Brian

International Women's Day

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I celebrate International Women's Day, not because there is some inherent necessity to elevate the concept of womanhood, for women are a creation of the same Mind and Hands that cast all the wonders of the universe across the sea of nothingness, as perfect in their conception and teleologically complete in their existence as anything in the manifestation of all creation.

I celebrate International Women's Day in the same way that I celebrate all of the beautiful wonders and amazing marvels displayed in the panoply of this existence, surely distinct each in its own right, but by no means separate or divorced from the whole─by no means an entity that requires the effort of anyone to enhance the glory of its own essential qualities.

I celebrate the strength of womanhood, not as a distinction from humanity, but as another refraction of that same notable quality variably inherent to all of humanity, a manifestation of power and depth displayed across a spectrum of expression, equal, but wonderfully not identical.

I celebrate the women in my life like my mother, who painted a flesh and blood portrait of resilience, strength, perseverance, and creativity that was essential to the crucible of who I would be in this world, and what I could achieve.

I celebrate the beauty of my wife, not merely that overwhelmingly appealing physical attractiveness that took my breath away and imprisoned all other thoughts of a life without her, but the beauty of her grace toward me through all these years, the powerful beauty of her vision of the potential that was locked inside me and the patience to unleash it. The beauty of her compassion to those who are so often discarded by a world that values lesser qualities than the soul of a human being.

I celebrate the passion of my girls, who are not afraid of the future, and who burn with a raging (Alex) and stoically quiet (Caera) zeal to seize the future and make it a better place.

I celebrate the women in my life who taught me the love of the written word, the passion to pursue excellence in my art; who taught me to walk in the paths beyond this world into the presence of God, who taught me concepts of compassion and generosity and grace.

I celebrate International Women's Day because, unfortunately, there are so many whose eyes have not been opened to the reality that womanhood is a concept complete in its perfection, consummate in its execution, and wholly unnecessary of improvement or confinement.

I celebrate the beauty and dignity and strength of the marvelous creation of women, unique in all the universe, and as worthy of wonder and admiration as any other marvelous feature of existence.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Glen Kappy 23 April 2017

Neal, Just read this and, first, since I'm interested in your poetry, I was interested to learn some details of your life. With you I celebrate the female of the human species as the most beautiful of God's creation. Particularly for those who want women subjugated and think they have the Bible's authority to do it, they need to notice that male and female are created in God's image and that the woman's place beneath man was a result of the fall, a temporary condition now undone in the One who makes all things new, who establishes a new covenant predicted by prophets and fulfilled in his person and life. Which reminds me of your description of you mother who painted a flesh and blood portrait... This, it seems to me, is exactly the idea in John chapter 1 where it says no one has ever seen God, but Jesus Christ has made him known. In him we have the best picture of God- not a static image but a whole life. Thank you for writing this. If you're interested, if you haven't read them already, most of my poems in ph that have a Home Pome in their title are to my wife. The peace that confounds understanding be yours. Glen

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Bharati Nayak 10 March 2017

I love your concept of womanhood as essentially beautiful in so many ways.A wonderful write that goes into my favorite list.To quote a few lines- - - I celebrate International Women's Day in the same way that I celebrate all of the beautiful wonders and amazing marvels displayed in the panoply of this existence, surely distinct each in its own right, but by no means separate or divorced from the whole─by no means an entity that requires the effort of anyone to enhance the glory of its own essential qualities.

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Seamus O Brian 25 March 2017

Greetings, Bharati! I have been scarce on this forum due to busyness of life, but I am very pleased to return and find your delightful comments. Be blessed, my friend! :) S

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Anne Yun 09 March 2017

As one of the women in this world, your poem brings me so much delight and warmth, wow, those women in your life, your mom, your wife, your girls are all shining from your eyes, so wonderful!

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Seamus O Brian 25 March 2017

Thank you, Anne, I am certain that you also are a light of truth and blessing to those who know you. You have certainly blessed me with your visionary writing and your collegial insight. Thank you!

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Bill Cantrell 09 March 2017

I agree with tom, one of the best poems I've ever read...the beauty of her grace towards me all these years...just wonderful poetry! ! !

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Seamus O Brian 09 March 2017

Thank you, Bill, for your kindness as always. I have been inspired by so many wonderful people in my life, many who just happened to have their wonderfulness expressed through the lens of womanhood. I am so pleased that this was meaningful to you. Be blessed, my friend. :) S

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Tom Billsborough 08 March 2017

Some think you need rhyme to create poetry but this proves them wrong. It is the true essence of poetry and a wonderful celebration of one of our favourite and eternally mysterious subjects. It's one of the best I've read on PH and will zoom into my list of favourites, Seamus.

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Seamus O Brian 08 March 2017

Thank you, Tom. There will come a time perhaps when the urgent distractions of life will abate and afford me the opportunity to conjure words that rhyme and yet diligently obey the track of my thoughts simultaneously. In the meantime, I am more than glad for the insights and fellowship of keen poets like yourself. Cheers, good friend! :) S

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