Interaction Poem by Raveendran N.V.

Interaction

Rating: 4.7


Too busy to think about myself I used to stand
From morning till evening, sentry,
Between sleeplessness and armed excursions,
Where it was too hot during the day- time,
But when enough green and youth and keen eyes
And something inborn was there to keep
Me a dreamer nearly happy.

The sun had just mounted to burn out the day
When you in stripes and colours and agile beauty
Caught me in your tiny curious eyes. There was
A twitch and a flash of the tail and a shrill cry:
Was it a spoof, warning or squirrel regard?

What speed, twinkle, your brown-gray hair in flight,
I in regimentals- a prisoner of existence.
Days passed: When I stood still and solemn
It seemed at least for once our differences vanished
And you alighted my right boot, found your way up,
The rawness of the tickle slowly turning
Into sweet torment and near my belt line
Your paw permeating into my raw flesh,
Infusion of agony and ease!

What startled you who ran down your hesitant run?
Did I yell, shriek in throbbing ecstasy?
You waited a second near my knee
To watch my looks and took leave for ever
To stir memory and desire in vacant hours.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 28 January 2008

'...Me a dreamer nearly happy....' It is very beautiful sounds, my friend - romantic

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Max Reif 29 July 2007

I enjoy reading your description. I wasn't completely sure if this was a squirrel or a woman! I think the point though is that it's the former. I like reading your longer pieces like this one.

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Patti Masterman 29 May 2007

This is very lovely to me in some fashion.

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Lorena Walker 17 May 2007

Great poem! I esp. love the line, 'The sun had just mounted to burn out the day.'

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Olabode Oluwatayo 10 May 2007

Wonderful Lyric! ! ! Highly Metaphoric! 'Was it a spoof, a warning or a squirrel Regard? ' 'To watch my looks... memory and desire in vacant hours' as if giving room for your imagination to roam! KIP THAT PET! ! ! 9 for this! ! ! ! ! ! ! Rave..

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