Insubstantial Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

Insubstantial

Rating: 5.0


you've heeled me love
a half-tame wolf
with my heart
hanging down my chest
all disturbing ripples of color
and nothingness
I feel insubstantial
like a thin shell
cracking with each breath
at the silence inside
wondering how I will move
from this sadness that
I tiptoe through
barefoot and blindfolded
among its pain daggers

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
allan james saywell 05 December 2005

there is a little message in this poem, a little sadness you have to be barefoot and blindfolded so you can hide from the pain, so sad Ohhhhhhhhhh Yeahhhhhh

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