Insomnia Poem by Anna Banasiak

Insomnia

Rating: 4.8


quiet rhythms of jazz
flow in the pouring rain
we cuddle the pillow
my dog and I
lonely jazzmen
we fall
in the bliss
of freedom

Tuesday, August 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: inspirational
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 14 May 2020

Jazz on a rainy afternoon. Sitting with your dog in calm comfort. All seems well. This isn't a desperate case of insomnia. It almost seems like an excuse to slow activity to a stand still so you can check your inner self and find your identities as " lonely jazzmen" who have achieved or are about to achieve the " bliss of freedom, " which will transcend the loneliness and bring you into the mellow mood of the jazz performance.

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A B Faniki 09 August 2019

Lovely image u have created. The image is comforting I can relate to it, is anazing

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 September 2018

the bliss of freedom and sleep in peace and then again wake up to be creative......... very nice poem. tony

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Dev Anand 09 August 2018

we cuddle the pillow my dog and I lonely jazzmen we fall in the bliss of freedom.desire for bliss . very nice poem.dear poetess. dev

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