Inside My Head (C) Poem by Margaret Alice Second

Inside My Head (C)



I left my body behind to live in my mind,
physical life marked by food & comforts
with this ego - calculating, wide-awake
and analytic, in control; doesn't work
for me - escaping piecemeal through

Children's fiction does not help enough,
standing all day at my desk - for health
reasons, trying to concentrate; messed
up my production even more, thus only
by lifting up and looking down into the

Situation from above, is there hope for
my completing the pilgrimage on earth
without feelings or emotions interfering
with the little routines of my lived with-
out common-sense because I believe

Instincts provide better guides to decide
on action required, tho' without signs of
Hans Christian Andersen's uncommon
sense inspiring him to go against advice
so he became the most-read author of

Fairytales, while I simply live within the
make-believe universe inside my head

Sunday, September 25, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I rewrote 'Dream Of Eternity' after revision and editing
showed how unclear the meaning was.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marianne Reninger 25 September 2016

uncommon sense inspiring him to go against..., love that phrase. Of course, I'm Danish and was raised on Hans Christian Andersen. Artistic inspiration comes from many sources, dreams and memories being most important. Continue your make-believe universe to create such good work!

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