Inside Domes Poem by Naseer Ahmed Nasir

Beautifully positive in spite of the inner tears. I like your resounding last line. The poet who connects with his readers is a poet who is worthy of the name. Kind regards, Sandra

What a princess are you looking at/for! She is fantastic. Amasing piece.

lovely...the last line makes it

wonderful piece of poetry. Nicely penned,10 for you

This is great. I specifically like the last verse: Live if you must. Inside domes but keep a door open.

Each line in this poem is a meaningful quote which makes the reader ponder and realise it is a very original piece and will cerainly keep my door open in my dome, great work Naseer regards

it is only those who have experienced the breadth of life...that can convey these meaningful phrases and visions. I enjoyed this very much, Naseer, and will read more of your works. A subtle and masterful work. -Tailor

lovely poetic thoughts..great one..10 Ency Bearis

Well said, The final line makes the poem for me also.