Insanity Begins Poem by Asif Baloch
Insanity Begins
Memories vanished
Thoughts mingled
Numb and no feelings
Insanity begins
World of darkness
Hopes with hopelessness
Sleep without dreams
Insanity begins
Denial and misery
Soul without body
Heart with no hopes
Insanity begins
Climbing with no end
Dying without death
Breathing with no air
Insanity begins
To be loved with no love
To be touched with no hands
I have become forbidden
Insanity begins
Heart gave a cry
Soul put a sad smile
A poem written by blood
Insanity begins
A very sad and dark verse - but very well written with repeated lines for needed emphasis. Reads well. a ten is deserved.
The intense insanity of the poem is wonderful. Thank you.
`Drink your passion.Be in disgrace.' Rumi dear asif, its a great job.
deep, emotional poem portraying a terrible life. very inspiring, thanks
This is a very very good poem....so well structured...so very well expressed..probably one of the best I read ever....10
Correct hopeless to hopelessness. Well conceived thought and well built up
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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A very sad and dark verse - but very well written with repeated lines for needed emphasis. Reads well. a ten is deserved.