Innocent Smile That Hurts.... Poem by SALINI NAIR

Innocent Smile That Hurts....

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Innocent smile shows her jaw
Hands that moves with smile
She was holding her mother’s hand
She was the gift of lonely street
A peep to loss of her life
It s blooded as a pelt of manhood
Loss of humanity at a glance
The echo of loss and sympathies
Story that pedigree her past
Loss of number that needn’t record
But it’s next you and me, as he is here and there
And then you will weep in those silent shadows
Be aware her pain is ours………

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Tuesday, February 4, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 27 December 2014

Be aware her pain is ours……… A heart touching message......................10

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Salini Nair 11 February 2014

thanks all for valuable comments

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Geetha Jayakumar 06 February 2014

Beautiful poem Shalini..Beautiful lines..It s blooded as a pelt of manhood... Be aware her pain is ours…Very true said her Innocent smile that hurts...I loved reading each lines..

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Kee Thampi 05 February 2014

narrow pink line of life long pain She was holding her mother’s hand She was the gift of lonely street A peep to loss of her life It s blooded as a pelt of manhood Loss of humanity at a glance

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