SALINI NAIR

Gold Star - 6,614 Points (2/2/1981 / kottayam)

Innocent smile that hurts....


Innocent smile shows her jaw
Hands that moves with smile
She was holding her mother’s hand
She was the gift of lonely street
A peep to loss of her life
It s blooded as a pelt of manhood
Loss of humanity at a glance
The echo of loss and sympathies
Story that pedigree her past
Loss of number that needn’t record
But it’s next you and me, as he is here and there
And then you will weep in those silent shadows
Be aware her pain is ours………

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Submitted: Tuesday, February 04, 2014
Edited: Wednesday, April 23, 2014

Topic of this poem: life


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Comments about this poem (Innocent smile that hurts.... by SALINI NAIR )

  • Gold Star - 25,464 Points Akhtar Jawad (12/27/2014 8:33:00 PM)

    Be aware her pain is ours………
    A heart touching message......................10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,614 Points Salini Nair (2/11/2014 9:17:00 AM)

    thanks all for valuable comments (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,548 Points Geetha Jayakumar (2/6/2014 10:09:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem Shalini..Beautiful lines..It s blooded as a pelt of manhood...
    Be aware her pain is ours…Very true said her Innocent smile that hurts...I loved reading each lines.. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,729 Points Kee Thampi (2/5/2014 12:40:00 AM)

    narrow pink line of life long pain
    She was holding her mother’s hand
    She was the gift of lonely street
    A peep to loss of her life
    It s blooded as a pelt of manhood
    Loss of humanity at a glance (Report) Reply

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