Innocence's Misery Poem by sahar alameddine

Innocence's Misery

Rating: 4.5


a tear is torturing a heart filled with grief
and the shadows of humanity prevents the relief
the smoke of cruelty obscures the sun of life
that war continues till our brother we have to fight

human is not perfectly made as god is
selfishness and greed have led us to this
self love and pleasures are the drugs of blindess
human being is so blind till he's punishing the innocence

the society has become like an enraged volcano
and the flames of lava will burn our combo
till the music of joy turns to tragedy
that happiness we used to have becomes misery

free their blood and release their veins
the real question is where is our brain
we still want more we still want everything
when the innocence is crying and our futur is bleeding

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sharad Juneja 10 June 2012

Sahar..Mind blowing.......It's really beautiful...I love ur creativity......U r expressing through ur own eyes

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Dougie Fresh 11 June 2012

Very cool write! ! ! love it! ! !

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Miss Darkness 11 June 2012

thank u guys i really appreciate ur comments!

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mario 06 August 2022

strange feeling i got from this. where r u now? hope ure doing alright

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Thoughts Of A Poet 04 August 2012

the shadows of humanity i love that word, wow this poem is so good, and i was wondering could i use that as a title for my next poem that i'm going to write :)

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Miss Darkness 12 June 2012

very true Besa, but sooner or later that human being will regret everything he did but when this will happens? ? ? i think when it's too late unfortunately and when he tastes what it feels like to be under cruelty...: /

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Besa Dede 11 June 2012

Beautiful poem with a significant meaning to nowadays' situations around the world. Alas, human being is responsible for creating the beautiful and for destroying it at the same time: (( ~Besa

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Miss Darkness 11 June 2012

thank u so much dougie :))

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