Inner Turmoil Surfacing Poem by Cilene Farrell

Inner Turmoil Surfacing

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Inner turmoil surfacing in
unexpected places while
no one sees the loneliness through
the windows. When
will the turmoil surfacing
and the questions burning
cease to undermine
what is entwined with
My tranquility? .............How
do those who claim to know
what fulfils the human soul
explain through learned verses
The truth that lies beneath the surface?
Yet those who claim to know what fulfills
This human soul, possess not
the desire or what is required to search
for the inner turmoil surfacing in
Unexpected places while
No one sees
The loneliness……..

(24/01/08)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Karin Lowe 30 November 2008

Your poem really spoke to me during this very difficult and emotional time in my life. Thank you.

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Melanie, You express intricate thoughts in an understandable poetic style. I'm not sure anyone can really know what lies beneath and within a particular person. Our experts give us generalizations that often are inadequate when it comes to an individual. Lol, you said it much better and I probably didn't get all of what you wrote. A poem like this is one you come back to and gnaw on until you unlock its secrets. Peace, L&T

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