Inner-City762 Poem by DAVID GERARDINO
Inner-City762
I want to climb that mountain,
I want to reach for the stars,
I want to fly into a rainbow,
just to feel your love.
AND we dance in the pouring
rain,
and we laugh like children
in the spring, just to feel your
love.
I want to find forever,
just to feel your love.
these words are great just on there own david this is quite good i enjoyed it Warm regards allan
IF you play guiter, put capo on 2nd frett, and hit a 1,4,5 the words make more sence that way.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 2:29:06 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Well, some folks evidently like this poem, but David, you've included two of what must be the top ten over-used cliches in the English language - reaching for the stars and climbing that mountain. Jeez, I don't think they even use those in high school graduation speeches anymore. The sentiment in the poem is nice, but good poetry takes more than sentiment. I think you already know that.