Inertia Is The Greatest Sin Poem by Captain Cur

Inertia Is The Greatest Sin

Rating: 5.0


No mountain is forever built.
Flowers bloom then they wilt,
nature's forces wear them down,
forever lost and never found.

Moonless nights where light is dead,
phantom coldness shears my head;
jagged rock and icy steel
camouflage the things I feel.

When my eyes turn to the sea,
waves of passion thrive in me.
Caution I dropp to a whirl of wind,
freely falls in the ocean's spin.

Voyages I fail to take
each day harder are they to make.
A heart must act or never win.
Inertia is the greatest sin!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Grantham 04 February 2013

I love this poem, you have to do something to make life work Thanks

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Shahzia Batool 28 January 2013

From the introductory idea till the culmination in the end, your composition is measured by all line & length...good poetry with a result in our hand: A heart must act or never win. Inertia is the greatest sin!

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