Indifference Poem by John Leach

Indifference

Rating: 2.8


I'm just another toy for you
Though, I don't really mind.
You said it's always about me
But I'm in love with you so much
The only thing I left to do, is dream
Of just another touch of yours.
But you too blind to see…Or maybe
You don't even want to see?
Maybe the love you have is not
the love you really need?

Friday, March 21, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love hurts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aria Siren 03 April 2014

Oooh I like the last line of this. The simple short form is good because it doesn't distract from the point you're making at the end. Well done. Just my interpretation but it sounds like both of these poems are about the same person.

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