Indian Rainbow Poem by Indira Renganathan

Indian Rainbow

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The dhuppatta of the Indian angel
Sprawling over there far in the ether
A half-saree rather arched providential
Seven coloured, a shamiana-splendour

Respectful Violet hopeful to be honoured
Narcotic Indigo dreaming to get refreshed
Lovely Blue calm to be loved
Fulcrum-Green effectively to be sensed
Self-confident Yellow preaching to be bold
Splendid Orange ever stepping to succeed
Vital Red brimming invigorated

The dhuppatta in ether plumes
Emoting the angel's attributes
And the angel is like the lotus
Sunken wedded in the sun's bliss
Her dhuppatta too, look, with her in sinks

Friday, May 2, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
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The dhuppatta in ether plumes Emoting the angel's attributes And the angel is like the lotus Sunken wedded in the sun's bliss Her dhuppatta too, look, with her in sinks... ruely beautiful feelings. masterly mind with perfect accuracy..... very good i wrote'Colour' depicting rainbow. read if u like it

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 21 May 2009

wonderful! ! ! what an amazingly embroidered words! ! ! dear, friend. if time permits. please, read and comment on my seven new poems on sea and other six poems on sea. thank you very much. have nice adventurous days there! ! ! Choir of Coral (page 7) Fish Dialogues (page 8) Flee to Sea (page 8) Leaf Wave (page 11) Luminous Boat (page 12) Mysterious Depth (page 13) Sea’s Sunset (page 16) A Rhyme of A Mariner (page 3) A Voyage to A Dreadful Edge (page 4) Bay Song (page 6) Hommage à Japonaiserie (page 9) Lighthouse In You (page 11) Sonatina Oceania (page 16)

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the dresses of indian woman are the most colorful i think...though the half saree has almost become extinct...a lovely tradition in dresses we have

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