Indescribable Nature Poem by Vision Ghost

Indescribable Nature

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Rekindling a memory, of a time way back when
I was just a little school boy, around the age of ten
Trying to perceive of another’s life, so worth living
Or maybe as a fox in an endless forest, for roaming

Would walk to school, to fathom what or how I felt
Never ever divulging a secret, I kept under my belt
For the tree that grew so far away, from my house
That I would never climb or hide in, like the mouse

Wanted to be the badger sleeping, deep underground
In a huge woods of such, natural display and sound
Saw a squirrel in a dream, and so wanted to chase it
Up the tree like it can go, in such speed, without limit

Felt the urge, the voices on the wind calling me there
As to remove myself from here, and follow on the air
To the place I’ve felt at home, as my instincts enabled
Feeling so trapped in society, and forever so disabled

Seeing this from my bathroom window, across the field
Where the corn grows, every spring for a farmers yield
Yet I wanted to play in amongst, the wildlife born here
Running free and so boundless, with my friends so near

That the fern and bracken become my shelter, from rain
Be guided by the moon and sun, not alarm clocks reign
Await the rabbit to emerge, after chasing it down a hole
Set my night to be my day, as survival is my only goal

Gathering my harvest, free from financial considerations
Commute to feeding grounds, without traffic congestions
Learn from my experiences, not the strictest of schooling
This patch is mine without, the politician who’s fooling

Dextrous qualities to be high up, in that tree in the wood
Much less complication as my presence, is understood
Immersed in what for me, is simply more than fantasy
I thus beg this to one day and forever, to be my reality

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 01 October 2006

V.G.>>>Nice Work...Meticulous attention to Structure and Meter, here...Stanzas are tight and crisp, allowing for a smooth flux throughout the Poem....A Fine Penning, V-Ghost'''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Epsom, East Surrey
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