Independence In My Thought Poem by TADASHA TRIPATHY

Independence In My Thought

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I think
My country will
completely be independent
When 15th august will be
A day more important
Than a simple celebration
'Triranga' will be
A flag more than a simple flag
The history Of independence
Will be more than
A chapter to be remembered
And the freedom fighters
Will be given respect
As a duty from core of heart
Treating more than
To show the formalities
Above all religion, cast
Above all economic status
And the so called aristocracy
In our society.

Saturday, August 16, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: visionary
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuy Amante 19 August 2014

I hope your Independence Day was full of joy! A fine writer you are! ! !

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 17 August 2014

This is a phenomenal piece carved out from the depth of your heart.......enamoured of one's country............. very well composed

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Abhipsa Tripathy 16 August 2014

Oh! really a very fantastic poem dear. I liked it.

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Akhtar Jawad 16 August 2014

As a duty from core of heartTreating more thanTo show the formalitiesAbove all religion, castAbove all economic statusAnd the so called aristocracyIn our society. A nice meesage with great thoughts.

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TADASHA TRIPATHY

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Sonepur, ODISHA< INDIA
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