Indeed High Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Indeed High

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It was joint venture
To shape the life and future
If she was really behind the success
She must have all the times same smiling face

I can’t let it
I need to hold it with delight
It is also right
With you as Mr. Right

My failures and success
Brought all sun shine on face
We both faced criticism
And sometimes elated with favoritism

I could not have dreamed
About it without team
It was our effort
That made ship to reach at port

It was amazing
And surprising too
That we could do
And prove true

You remained at the back ground
And allowed me to go for new round
It led to find of new and promising land
Where you were to remain with me as friend

Your contribution is indeed high
It has provided me with wings to fly
It would have remained only dream
If it was not with the Pointer of sun’s beam

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 September 2013

Some Girl Ah so sweet and lovely - a smiling delightful poem: -)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 September 2013

Ultra Violet What's a poem?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 September 2013

very good Shakil Ahmed Baliyavi7 minutes ago very good popem

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Gajanan Mishra 10 September 2013

good friendship, nourish each other, that I like. thanks.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 September 2013

It was joint venture To shape the life and future

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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