Incompleteness Poem by ramesh rai

Incompleteness



Life surrounding the creation
floats in an incompleteness and hollowness
parch the melody of life
attune inabstinence of life
choosing stones instead of flower
finishes the life from births to its decay
sings a melancholic song
throughout the life lacking perfection
life can not be completed
during one life time, rather
it is completed after death
by the followers and inmates
by remembering the work
and renovating the residual.

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Rachel Butler 18 July 2015

Creation, forever repeating, as we need to repeat a lesson!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 27 February 2014

life can not be completed during one life time Life is an ongoing affair. Beautiful poem.

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