Incomplete Poem by Judah Daniel

Incomplete

Rating: 5.0


Sometimes you feel incomplete
and sometimes you feel so complete,
we never want to let go of what make us complete.
It's like gold and diamond,
we keep them in our heart with pride.
We never want them to go,
because when the go we lose the strength to glow,
just like the snow causes cold
and there won't be cold without rain or snow,
so without them
we feel lost
and without our true love,
we are incomplete.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Judah Daniel 02 April 2014

Yogiraj, that is how our loved ones are.they are so close to our heartthank yu so much.

0 0 Reply
Biplab Singha 01 April 2014

Nice poem done I really admire A part of life Have drawn Really feel good How have said the life is incomplete Without love.

1 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success