' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' Inboard Entertainment Poem by Dónall Dempsey

' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' Inboard Entertainment

Rating: 2.6


Midway
over the Atlantic

the Starship Enterprise
gets hit up by

a Romulain warship.

They're not sure
if the deflector shields

can...take it!

We too
tumblle from side to side

tossed by
turbulence

like a child's
toy

flying boldly to
New York.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
To Windward 01 January 2010

Nicely done, but be careful with those split infinitives Donall (they'll play havoc with your phraser) . I hope you beamed down safely to NY. Best wishes for the New Year

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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