In Your Absence Poem by Nilika Athauda

In Your Absence

Rating: 4.0


Sun would shine flowers will bloom
Bees may fly for nectar
Winds will blow - clouds will flow
Rain may fall down harder
Birds will chirp - squirrels will jump
Things be fine with nature
While the world's move on -The clock ticks by
I'd be stoned and alone no wonder……

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
When you feel so close to someone, you feel that person's absence, make your mind wonder.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jayatissa K. Liyanage 28 August 2014

Romantic feelings of a lonely heart. I like the simple diction you used to expressed such a feeling touching way. Great. Congrats Nilika. Please read mine too and comment.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 19 August 2012

A nice little poem depicting nature and its beauty. The last line hits at the heart. Thanks.

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