In Time Poem by Claudia Krizay

In Time

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Faces of terror, and
Mountains of madness,
Climbing upward towards oblivion,
I could envision
Saturn dancing in a slate gray sky above me-
I was alone within
My own Garden of Eden, running from
A sky that rained tears that had fallen in time-
Days of peace and coherence,
Moments of harmonious thoughts and
Memories of a life replete with bliss never-ending had
Vanished in the wind and had been carried away-
Climbing that phantasmal ladder,
Hoping to touch the sky-
The sky where some believe angels await-
In these primordial beings,
I am not a believer.
Surrounded by mountains of madness-
Stepping over stones while all eyes are upon me-
Drifting away into some other universe
I would awaken in my own Garden of Eden-
Mountains of madness are cloud covered and
Rain has cleansed these faces of terror-
I have in my own way touched the sky and
Can see the miracle of Saturn’s dancing and
Venus rising while the full moon shines light
Brightening my once darkened world-
I had wished upon a star and my dreams have come true-
I am alive and in my solitude, calm and in this moment-
I am a believer…
I am surrounded by trees of oblivion- and we all know
What we do NOT know
Will not harm us and that
Rain has fallen in the stillness of time-

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juan Olivarez 26 September 2011

Very beautiful words, I am glad I took the time to read your work.

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Allemagne Roßmann 25 September 2011

Saturn dancing in a slate gray sky above me- i love specially this line..expresses the way u felt over the poetry and its impression...its beyond words to explain people will be elated to read this again and again

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Stefanie Fontker 22 September 2011

Wow, striking, I'm in love with this poem. Beautiful work, I have often longed to see the planets, it's sometimes a curse to live in the city.

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