In The Words Of Bluesman Jack Poem by Dave Alan Walker

In The Words Of Bluesman Jack

Rating: 4.3


From bar to bar
I play my life story
to the crowd

I play for the people
I play for my sanity

I've played
for forty years on the road
with nothing but the blues

I've lived a full life
but a lonely life
The hearts I have taken
The hearts I have broken

It all comes together
in the blues songs of salvation
with the pain and the hate
of a world in despair

From bar to bar
I play my life story
to the crowd

I play them the blues
the blues of salvation

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Willie Walker 16 February 2012

This poem makes me wonder if you been reading my mail Dave. I been there. I done that. When I sing, I sing the blues. Comes from poverty. Comes from pain. Comes from missing those who won't come again. Seems we call out when need. Seems we sing the blues and we bleed. Hearts we hurt. Not really news. Another reason we sing the blues.

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Renu Kakkar 17 February 2012

good poem..a picture emerges as one reads...

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 17 February 2012

Great poem big brother, as always you painted a clear picture...truly loved it.

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Tsira Gogeshvili 14 February 2012

Hi dave Very beautiful and melodious, almost a high-grade blues I hear in ears... If they (my ears) not lies to me Thanks for the comment Tsira

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Tsira Gogeshvili 14 February 2012

Very beautiful and melodious, almost a high-grade blues I hear in ears... If they (my ears) not lies to me Thanks for the comment Tsira

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Smoky Hoss 25 July 2017

Blue is the color of salvation....

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Summer Huggins 22 February 2012

i like this thank you for shareing! and thank you for reading my poems and leaving a comment ;)

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(De Va) 22 February 2012

this is wonderful, your poetry always paints a picture for me to view. blessings...

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Ruby Juniper 20 February 2012

Enjoyed reading this. I think it expresses the spirit of the blues really well.

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Smoky Hoss 17 February 2012

This is great Dave! Should be a song for sure!

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