Erin Thomas

Rookie (Riverside, California)

In the Shade of Suicide Poem by Erin Thomas


steel bars seal the concrete cell
dim lighting casts a haze on everything
suffocating hope until the pulse is still

here unheard there sobs a secret weeping soul
the air is weighed beyond all comforting
steel bars seal the concrete cell

some can sense a lost control
regrets cascade and crush in heavy throng
suffocating hope until the pulse is still

year by passing year brief glances rise and fall
a faded figure sometimes seen to hang
steel bars seal the concrete cell

wrenched within their drunken pall
detainees wake to hear a gasping lung
suffocating hope until the pulse is still

violence born of sorrow echoes through the hall
the final act of him who kicked and swung
steel bars seal the concrete cell
suffocating hope until the pulse is still

Submitted: Saturday, July 20, 2013
Edited: Monday, July 22, 2013
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Completed September 13,2004.
Published in The Awakenings Review in Summer of 2007.


This is a villanelle poem.

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