In The Mirrored Eyes Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

In The Mirrored Eyes

Rating: 4.9


When the island of our eyes
Soaks in the rain
Take my hands friend
Purify my heart
Purify my soul
Let me glow
Let us vow
Eternal friendship
In the mirrored eyes
which have no end
Arcane

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C. P. Sharma 06 October 2008

Heartfelt your poem. Arcane.

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Brianna Wilshusen 06 October 2008

I love the wroding, very interesting.10

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Evaughn Gray 06 October 2008

that was beautiful, it was nice, soft and very tender! loved it, great poem goes with a great poet~Hazel G.E

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Cathleen Hodgkinson 07 October 2008

Nothing more beautiful than the divine unconditional friendship of two souls...great poem! -Cathy

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Anna jonson 07 October 2008

goood poem with a beautiful composition...............beautiful.....

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Shabre Moore 22 January 2009

its deep thats really deep were u sad when u wrote that cause its sounds like it cause i know when i'm feeling a certain way i'll write how i feel at that time an keep it as a memory thats y asked

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Rachel Butler 28 November 2008

Thank you for sharing..Your words made me hold my breath as I read

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Ema Nekaf 24 November 2008

Great structure. Great wordage. Great imagery. Great poem.

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Written so well... great work here krista

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Sarah Abdullah 15 October 2008

Simple Words Million Meanings Great how with Simple Lines you gave a Great Message

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