In The Late Evening Rain Poem by Aldo Kraas

In The Late Evening Rain



In the late evening rain
God said to the people love each other as God loves you
And during the late evening I was bored to death at home
And my best friend was a botttle of Seven up with rum
It was not because I am one alcoholic it was just to kill the evening that Was so boring
But the rain kept coming down from the sky and I could here it during My sleep

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Pruchnicki 25 April 2011

Man! your stuff leaves a whole lot to be desired! Besides your quota of errors, there remains sheer monotony!

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Aldo Kraas

Aldo Kraas

Sao Paulo Brazil
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