In The Dark Poem by Dave Alan Walker

In The Dark

Rating: 5.0


The lights are gone
we are in the dark
the world will not see
when the sun goes down

We have no one to blame
but ourselves
we ruined what we had
and destroyed
what God had left

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 23 August 2013

Ah wow an envirönmental poem so gooood! Super job in flow n theme too.

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Ramesh Rai 19 August 2013

A great spiritual write. we are now destroying the world. we are now sufferer.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 20 August 2013

We have no one to blame but ourselves truth there, Dave.

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Tribhawan Kaul 20 August 2013

So true....we are responsible for what we are reaping.

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 August 2013

Very well said..We have destroyed....Beautiful poem with great message.

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Alookh (matin) 14 September 2013

brief, meaningful, particular, powerful and true..... i regret for this world.....how beautiful it could be if we were not this much greedy!

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Alla Simone 31 August 2013

A glimpse into what the future would be if man were to continue ruining the earth. This is a piece that invokes thought. I enjoyed it.

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Subbaraman N V 24 August 2013

True! Let us honestly attempt to redeem.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 August 2013

In The Dark by Dave Alan Walker Hon. poet has worked nicely in fact we are digging our grave.....thank you

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 23 August 2013

Wow an environmentalist tune poem! Super job with d flow n theme poet Dave

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