In That Summer Of Loving You Poem by Debra A.G. Hawley

a fine tale of finding passion and the world spinning with delight until the end as all things end without reason the loss lingers the heart never able to return to that innocence before that sadness lit the eye to the great burning sun of suffering a wonderful poem

Debra: A beautiful, bittersweet poem. Well done. -chuck

A sad yet beautiful event nostalgically told so very well - excellent...

Love and heartbreak seems to mix as well as water and oil. We don't like to see either one in our lives. Good poem of love cut short. You might enjoy my poem titled A Broken Heart. I gave this poem a ten. God bless-Michael Jeffrey Gale.

You write so simply. Simply beautiful and meaningful. I wouldn't change a thing. It is wonderful. Simply Gyp's

J. Girl, this again captures the depth of you love. The only thing that I would change would be the last two sentences, to make this a 4 line stanza, since all the others are 4 lined. Otherwise, good work. Scarlett

Accessible and heartfelt and more - that is your gift. You capture emotional truth so very well. Thank you. I'll be back for more.