(3rd August / accra, ghana, west africa)

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IN SCHOOL

in school,
when i saw you
i intuited i have found
my lost world in you
i wish i could act
to be appreciated
by you in school.

in school,
it would be too sad
to narrate the ordeal
i have been through
i wonder if its best
i had met you
in the school.

in school,
though i had not said it
there has been so many ways
that i have shown it
my actions had done
whatever i wanted to say
at school.

in school,
i never thought
being in love
could take me to madness
well, it is better than
leaving me in sadness
in the school.

in school,
when i approached you
i knew i was silly
it was because
suddenly,
i forgot who i was
in school

in school,
why do you sneer
when i am near
it really breaks me
just tell me what to do
to get a room from you
in and out of school.

in school,
sometimes though it is hard
i guess i must let go
some things i wish to have
though good things also
could be found elsewhere
as it has been in school.

Submitted: Tuesday, January 22, 2008


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  • Hadi Hakkai Renato P. (12/9/2008 11:43:00 AM)

    i relate to this poem, i feel the same way about a guy

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  • Derek Quarles (6/18/2008 5:48:00 AM)

    i feel the same way about two different girls, the girls are like opposites but my love for them couldnt be more the same!

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  • Eithne Queen of Celts (4/16/2008 2:45:00 AM)

    Don't hold on to a little school-romance.The future will bring better things.

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