In Order Poem by SALINI NAIR

In Order



A fall of water with serenity
Orderly part of nature this side
Purity disperses its way
To form a flow of sovereignty

Ethics loot its way calmly
Balances with a norm tacit
A flow to unknown shore with hope
Unite and depart for an f low endless

Stops and weeps in some corners
Burst and creep in its extremes
Unity balances its long path
To be a part of nature’s cycle

Life is a flow through time and tides
A tide that weep and smile sometimes
Its norm is to be a part of nature
That wrestles with ‘karma’ all time!

©2015 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Saturday, October 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 05 October 2015

Life is a flow through time and tides A tide that weep and smile sometimes Its norm is to be a part of nature That wrestles with ‘karma’ all time! ..........So nicely envisioned basing on Karmic philosophy. Well drafted. Thanks for sharing.

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Michael Walkerjohn 03 October 2015

Aloha Salini... I have enjoyed this piece and the play with nature theme... I do have a question... Is it considered as 'natural', to wrestle with 'karma'? I have taken this moment, and looked more closely within your words... please consider this effort one of my own personal interest... Karmic Order? All fall in with serenity as life's waters flow ordered ones of nature each individual is supposed of purest sovereignty poised… One’s ethics must calmly balance all thoughts, hopes, fears and morals this ebb and flow of timeless circumstance unites or separates each and every personal story… What is unknown of everyone is that which cautions wit when so cornered please do not stop and weep, as this is an action expressing weakness which brings fear in its extreme… living’s cycle is one of mysteries; dispersed with metaphors synonyms, similes and more importantly; one’s will to be upon a path through happiness or disparity or anxiety and still clearly see all the extremities, to smile or weep, to fret or sleep; to continually keep that forward thought to believe, in one’s self in being an unselfish member of the species human… all fall in… or not I humbly ask that you consider allowing me to post this thought in our names here at ph.c Please contact me if you consider this word work to be appropriate and to be as much of you as it is of me... Thank you for joining US herein... IAM looking forward to enjoying a thorough peruse of all of your thoughts and words... all of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two

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