In My Dreams Poem by Goldheart Bird

In My Dreams

Rating: 3.5


Animals would live happily in the wild,
Flowers would dance,
And the wind will play ing my hair,
In my dreams

My shoes would glisten
my dress will be a velvet in a golden glow.
And my hair, twisted elegantly in a braid.
In my dreams
My violin, shining in the moonlight; the notes dancing superbly off the string,
In my dreams

I might dream on
But I have cofidence,
That one day, my dreams will be true.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shania K. Younce 18 March 2014

A very elegant write. It is a beautiful poem. Bien!

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Khairul Ahsan 24 January 2014

You have successfully described your wonderful dreams, in that, we all saw your dreams as we read the poem. Well done! 'And my hair, twisted elegantly in a braid.' - I liked this! 'My violin, shining in the moonlight; the notes dancing superbly off the string, In my dreams' - This is so beautiful, so imaginative! 'But I have cofidence, That one day, my dreams will be true.' - So be it, my dear poet!

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Kaelyn Kawai 22 January 2014

Your AMAZING. just AMAZING. NO WORDS, JUST AMAZING.

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Beach Girl 15 January 2014

What a lovely dream GB! It would be fantastic if we could all dream of flowers dancing and wind playing in our hair. I really loved the verse, 'My violin, shining in the moonlight; the notes dancing superbly off the string, In my dreams.' Just beautiful.

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Kanav Justa 23 December 2013

, , its good that you dream good, , , i am sick of my wierd dreams that makes no sense, , , , nice write, , keep penning, ,

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